Shitz.....

I just got back my 1st Reason and Persuasion essay..... sad to say... i didnt do very well....

Well i even i thought the essay wasnt good enough right after i finish it but i choose not to do anymore edits on it cause of time constrains...

My tutor gave me encouraging comments though.... He said i had a very philosophical way of writing and i have what it takes to write a good philosophy essay... the bad thing about my essay was i did not exert enough "control" in it.. i didnt make it convincing enough... and i agree with him.. i like my essay but i knew it wasnt convincing enough.

I guess writing it during the Chinese New Year holidays wasnt such a good idea...

All i can do now is finish up my 2nd essay(which is due in lest than 2 weeks with me having to study for 2 CA's coming up next week) and hope i get a better grade for it.... i need this A... i really need it...